Jaswir's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Deep Cut - Kinetic Typography]

You matched the music greatly with the text and voice over.
The text appeared at a great pace.

I think your intention for this was to convey a message in a persuasive way.
I don't feel persuaded nor did I get the message.

Maybe you can get some inspiration from these guys, they convey persuasive messages really well in my humble opinion that is :D
https://www.youtube.com/user/thamagicsho2003.
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCBIt1VN5j37PVM8LLSuTTlw

[GC&YC. Cyborg Body is da new trend. NO_) [Part 2]]

Very engaging story, rather original. I felt like this was really going somewhere, end then there was about to be an end pun which felt incomplete.

drewotdoocee responds:

Yes, objectively the end of toon isn't complete. I didn't know how to end, so I create kind of "joke" that heroes "don't care" about "сybernation"))
(sorry for my english)

[Little Amerika "Safety First"]

First off, I enjoyed the story line it engaged me.
One thing that really distracted me is that the white guy's nose looks like a penis.
Haha, this is just too coincidental. I'll be getting condoms for the first time soon xD and I understand this.

[Stick Baits cartoon - Men and roaches]

HAHA very funny man.

acentertoons4 responds:

Yup! and a lot more is on the way so follow to watch everyone of them

[Phone Porn]

You're pretty funny I like it :)

ChiragArikella responds:

thank you so much! keep supporting for more absurd and bad content mate!

[Dovahbear 4]

Very engaging. The part at 2 minutes where the bear randomly walks through a massive army made no sense and felt a little cheap to me

[TD-Educationese]

Yay something new from Dave :D.
Didn't really get your point of the hybrid-class.
If that ain't a hybrid class than what would a hybrid class be ...?

[ⓌｈＩｔｅ Ⓝｏｉ＄ｅ]

Great abstract animations, hands down. But the lack of story in it got me disengaged after a while So I skipped. It would've been really top notch if it had these great animations + an engaging story.

[Birthday 26]

Loved the part from the song. Think you did a great job on this LazyMuffin :D