Jaswir's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Nothing But Trubble Episode Two Part Two: Dryer Void]

In the beginning it wasn't clear to me what was happening.
The music also sounded too dramatic.
It would have sounded more fitting if you had like a beginning scene where the kid was just normally doing the laundrary and suddenly a monster appeared.

The way it was now : I heard "Daddy!", and I thought that the father disappeared in a air vent. Some crazy divorce shit

[Mr. Freeman, part 63]

GET OFF YOUR ASS AND CHANGE THE SYSTEM!!!!!!!! YAAAGH.

Wow Toonbox, you did a great job in making something abstract artsy yet meaningful and engaging.
Keep up the good work!
Wonder what people think who disagree with this message

[How Long? - Depressing Maths 1]

Wow really loved the story. That's actually quite an appealing math question :D.

LOTAC responds:

Thank you :) Glad you liked it. This is the first of a recurring sketch so there will be more of the same character coming soon

[ALWAYS SOMETHING!!!]

The experience of fucked up family with crazy weird problems is really well done.
Fantastic job!

OblitusCS responds:

Hahaha Glad you liked it man!!! Thanks for the love!!!

[Pokemon Trainer VS A NeW PoKeMon?!]

Groudon Groudon Groudon.
He's coooollll

[Pmation: "Clowning Around"]

Thanks Ross, always happy to view your cartoons. Just like when I was a kid, these are the toons that cheer me up when I feel sad.

[Rust: A Love Story]

Liked the twist at the end. Good art. Didn't understand the song, parody thingy..
Unless the parody is that female characters are guys in Rust?

[Detective Vermin]

All this eating at inappropriate times Eek. Pretty engaging. Good narrative and voice over.
Art is rather poopy. Don't know how to describe it better. Art could be a lot better

enter3002 responds:

If you think my art is bad, check out China, IL. Thanks for the 3 and a half stars though!

[Life on Grass - episode 4: The Bet]

Couldn't have said it better than BONESofBURIED