Jaswir's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Episode : Neveah]

Great story! Looking forward to next part.
Usually good movies on NG have good animations but bad storylines.
Glad to see some change :D

crs05 responds:

Thanks a lot!
I'll do my best next time!

[Shark With A Briefcase]

Great animation and all.
But at the end we never got to know what's inside the briefcase.
Neither did the killer kill the shark for the briefcase nor the snake.
So the killing of the shark at the end seemed rather random.
It also seemed rather random why the shark walked away after the lady asked what 's
inside. Because the shark showed no facial expression nor vocabulair or any clue why to walk away. Nor was it clear what the shark was meeting for.
I believe if you filled these holes it would get much better.

Gerkinman responds:

I am glad you enjoyed my little film, but I am afraid I would have to disagree, there is nothing I could write to fill those gaps that could ever be as satisfying as the speculation of a curious audience. This film was based on a dream I had, I didnt get the answers in the dream and I think in order to convey the experience properly in film I need to leave the viewer with the same questions I had upon waking. So yes, your right, having these questions answered would probably make for a more technically better film, but I also think it would lead to a blander and less interesting one. Embrace lifes mysteries! <3

[The Ballsack Ninja]

Your best one so far (since episode 1) Hahah!
Love the ending didn't expect.
Yoohoooo..... SMACK

ChutneyGlaze responds:

Thank you! Kids always get a kick out of getting kicked in the nuts!

[The Adventures of Chutney Glaze Season One Trailer!]

Really love your content. It has so much life in it the way things wiggle and wobble

ChutneyGlaze responds:

And it doesn't fall down!

[Infinite Legends]

Amazing.
Had so much tension that I wanted to see the next part immidiately I even checked your youtube channel to see if the next episode is not out already

TylerLandis responds:

Thanks so much!! The next two episodes are written, and most of the second one is recorded! 😊

[The SpongeBob SquarePants Anime - OP 2]

Thanks for putting the time into making this. The animation is really amazing, but you know that by now I figure. However this one lacked the wow factor that your first one had. The first part with the grave and sandy, top notch man.The end fight introduction between spongebob and squidward needs to be way more awesome it fell a little short.
As a anime lover I think of fights like naruto vs pain man. Their fight deserves to be way more.

Also after the first one you attracted me to know more about the story, how did plankton get squidward like that? I wanted to see some of the indepth narrative between the characters like in attack on ogre. I know this sounds strange, but I would want to see that more than the sequel of OP 1.

Narmak responds:

Thanks for the feedback!

[Filthy Frank Anime Opening 3]

I expected a really filthy version of the naruto opening.
This is just a bad version of naruto opening.
Using more filth and also not making something so similar to naruto but clearly naruto + different would make it a lot better in my opinion

ByAce responds:

Yeah, you are right. I made that video which is my first to show the audience how similar this naruto op is with filthy frank. I think I put way to much time into this but thanks for your criticism Sabooo, I appreciate your honesty.

[Formal Greetings ( Animated Music Video )]

Is that you rapping?
I really liked the combo of animation and real life rapping.
I think there is some potential to that!

bucketboi responds:

thank you very much, nice that you feel the combo and yes that is me rapping.

[Somewhere Other: Made a Fool]

Bravo, this was so so different from the usual stuff I see on New Grounds.

cecameron responds:

Thank you!

[Petey]

Wait what, why doesn't the bird fly out of the cage and take the ball in the first place

Sketchead responds:

He had a fear of leaving his cage, and the soccer ball was way too far away. I probably could’ve conveyed that better.